Each week one of our fabulous writers will be published here on our classroom blog, in celebration of their hard work...
A cat
with shimmering eyes and fur as fluffy as a mouse. With a scarf for when it is
snowy and soft white stockings. Playing kindly, biting toys with other cats.
Gliding with wings, I wish I could fly. Claws as sharp as love hearts. It feels
like flowers. He shows his cute, tiny face, he is attractive.
By
Imogen
Imogen has been so creative and used her imagination to paint this colourful and imaginative story for her readers in this independent piece of writing. She has chosen lovely, descriptive vocabulary which makes it much more interesting, and added lots of detail. Keep it up Imogen!
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