Each week one of our fabulous writers will be published here on our classroom blog, in celebration of their hard work...
The key began to glow. I carefully slipped it into the keyhole and the door slid open. Peeking inside I was surprised to find a snowy river with frozen trees. It was as quiet as a mouse. Two black and white owls were sitting in the trees. Nothing can live there because it is so frozen.
By Xinlai
Xinlai has really thought about how to make his writing interesting for the reader. He has added in lots of detail and used descriptive vocabulary. He has described what you might see, hear and feel which gives us a very clear picture. Keep it up Xinlai!
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