Each week one of our fabulous writers will be published here on our classroom blog, in celebration of their hard work...
The
massive lion prowls beneath the grass with her babies.
By
Jemma
Jemma
has used specific vocabulary that helps us as readers to see a clear picture of
what’s happening in her story. ‘Prowls’ and ‘beneath’ are much more interesting
words, which makes this a great piece of writing. Keep it up Jemma!
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