Each week one of our fabulous writers will be published here on our classroom blog, in celebration of their hard work.
Drifting
around the deep sea. Gliding in the seaweed.
Swimming
up to the waves, a sparkly seahorse jumps over the cave. Sparkly as a monster.
Fast
as a fox.
Then
he ran away.
By
Izac
In this piece of writing we were learning to start our sentences with a verb, which provides an interesting beginning. Izac has done a fabulous job of this, thinking carefully of strong verbs to describe the movement of the seahorse he is writing about.
Keep up the fabulous work Izac!
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